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Sigma 15.12.2013, 1:52 AM edit delete reply
Sigma
I just have to say, from your banner and avatar, I had lower expectations in terms of art, and then I see that your art is actually really good. You should update them :P
What throws me off is the dialogue; there's a lot of typos, and miss-used words. I understand if it's once or twice, and if English isn't your first language, but when it happens a lot, it really jerks me out of the story. However, you've improved a lot, so keep paying attention to that, and keep up the good work :)
IVA 15.12.2013, 8:34 PM edit delete reply
IVA
i'll try and update it--the banner and all. I am very sorry if i am not too fluid with the dialogue and its style. but i very much appreciate your critique since it is very helpful for an artist to learn from one's mistakes. you've been a good help. thanks again. ;)